Open Post to Peer Reviewers

The following is the rough cut to my project. Please, I like brutal honesty when it comes to this stuff, so don't be afraid to bash it up a lot, I really don't mind. Please leave me as much feedback is necessary for this.

Note: Turns out my rough cut is having trouble being uploaded onto Blogger, not sure why this is, but I'm trying to fix it as soon as I can.