I reviewed James' essay, which can be found here. James' essay is probably one of the more interesting one's that I've read, especially since it's main points center around UA college sensation, Brother Dean.
Form Suggestion:
Considering that this is your final cut, I feel as though it's going to be difficult finding opinions on the standardized form of an essay. An essay format is usually pretty straight forward: double-spaced, nice font, paragraph form and a works cited page. There is absolutely nothing out of place here in respect to form. If anything, I feel as though the title and heading should be more spaced out, but that's just a personal preference that I indulge in. Overall I also liked the content in your essay. You bring up good points about previous events that can relate to Brother Dean's situation and you display your argument with confidence. I really do think this is a good essay; a good enough essay that I don't think anything really needs to be changed.
Personal Reflection:
I feel as though from reading James' essay, I could've explained my claim in a much clearer fashion. James' essay was very clear in respect to what it's purpose was. I feel as though my project was sorely lacking that quality.
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