Peer Review 10b

I peer reviewed Ben Barnett's production schedule for Project 3. It looks really cool and can be found here.

Suggestions:
Overall I think the schedule looks really good. All the information is organized well inside a really neat table. It's clear which part of your essay he wants to work on during each day, even sometimes splitting a day up to work on multiple parts (ex. finishing your 3rd body paragraph Saturday afternoon, and then finishing your introduction and conclusion paragraphs the same Saturday, but in the evening). If I had to suggest anything to you, it's that the schedule is only for the productions week. There is nothing stating what you're going to work on a schedule for the following weeks of post-production as well, just to get a grasp on the whole project. Another thing I think would be helpful is including another column that might include certain claims that your trying to make for each paragraph. This might be helpful just to get a full grasp on what you're trying to write about for each piece of your project, and so that you're not just trying to wing it with no blueprint to base yourself off of. Otherwise, I like how organized this table is, and I think it will help if you follow your planning.